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A1: As the sunsets, the night starts to darken

B: Seems as that a new day has started

A2: The darkness starts to take over the light of day.

A: Noticeable as the night takes over.

B: Seems to have started a new dark day.

A1: As the sunsets, the night starts to darken

A: As noticeable it is, the dark time has come.

B: Seems as a new beginning of a day has just begun.

A2: The sheet of murk starts to take over.

. A: How clearly can you see the sheet of dimness

B: Oh, how does the start of a new night day.

A1: As the sunsets, the night starts to darken

A: As much as you can see the darkness, it gets darker.

A2: Soon pitch darkness comes alive

A: Darkness, oh how you change the day

B: The day has newly begun.

A1: As the sunsets, the night starts to darken

A2: Now the darkness has covered everything.

VBA

I can see that he is using repetition. I feels as that he is trying to point something out in this poem. He seems that he is worn out of something and he wanted to tell people about what he was feeling in that moment.

The easiest aspect is just expressing my feelings and the hardest part was making a beat to the Ballad. Aslo the rhyming and sylablls were very hard to make.

I wish i could, but there was nobody to ask and get good enough help from. If i did i would have asked for thier help

They want to express thier feeling to everyone, but not directly. So instead they write poems and express their toughts and feelings that way.

I like the expressional word "hahahahohoho". I can make a better image in the mind and get a better tought sent through the readers

Ballad

Hey, Hey, Hey there .

What, What, What’s your name??

Come, Come, come and have fun.

Please Please play with me

I am too too bored

Come Come and play with me

Hahaha hohoho

Lets have fun tonight.

I wish I wish that you could come .

But since you cant

It’s Ok

Then come again another day.

I will b waiting until you come

So until then………

I will be shouting for you

So then I will see you again!

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I hate you

I HATE YOU à Peter Na

I hate you!

I hate I hate I hate you.

The one most thing I hate is you.

You make me mad and annoyed

I don’t know how you can be like this.

Why are you doing this to me?

Please stop making me mad.

I will do something that you might really unlike

I really want to be nice and kind,

But you are getting me very irritated.

I can’t believe I became like this.

So please help me out

I really want to be nice.

So please, please

Help me to, be nice.

Reflection

> Fothis peom idea's came right in to my mind and wrote evrthing that seemed to be correct and rhymes.

When writitng this poem it was very fun and easy to write. I had much fun and was a very interestion task to do. I feel as that i released my expresions.