Writing HW

Peter Na WRITING 1 A block




http://www.wesh.com/cnn-news/20495627/detail.html
TITLE. Runaway Convert To Stay In Fla. For Now

¨ The author has a title that attracts the readers attention and have some accurate details that reasonably support the idea of the article. But as you can see the reader has a fairly broad topic, however you can see where he is headed. The questions by the reader is anticipated and also answered.
The reader has a good amount of knowledge, experience and fresh ideas for this writing. The writer gives all the details for the story and gets many points of view for this writing. The writer also gives information that goes beyond the obvious predictable. The\ overall conclusion for this article is that the writer is on balance and has great strengths and very little amount of weaknesses and has control on the topic.

http://edition.cnn.com/2009/US/08/04/plane.turbulence/index.html
TITLE. Passengers thrown about plane 'as if they were dolls'

The writer also gave a very attractive tile for the readers. The writer gave many specific about what happened. The topic is narrow and manageable. The details are accurate and present to support the topic. The writer leaves no questions for the readers and gave all the information of the article for the readers. The details about the story came from a accurate source and gave good details to support the topic. The overall summary for this article is the author gave very good details and went with the topic.



















Take Me to Casablanca


The topic is focused and clear. It hold the readers attention. The writer chose a topic that is fairly narrow and manageable. It seem that the writers has experience and knowledge for this type of writing. The support is reasonably good for the topic. The theme for this writing is clear and has a good understanding. The details show in-depth and has a strong sense of purpose. The writing also has a good understanding of life and picking out good details. This writing is fairly good and has strong details for this writing.





PETEr na
Writing 1
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Mr. Oben mentioned may thing about how youth can help the environment.
The most rememberable and impactful thing he said was that " If you have two choices you should think wisely and make the right choice." The reason why I think this would be impactful , because we all have choices and we always pick the choice that is good for us, but not for the environment. If we can choose from something we always need to think twice if it is good for us and the environment. Not the choice that is only good for us. If we think twice and pick a choice. The chosen choice will be a good choice. Not only for us but for the environment.